tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6517099403427212742.comments2021-11-22T12:18:33.849+13:00Toran @ Pt England SchoolPES Blogs 2018Ahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/06080563212380938695noreply@blogger.comBlogger156125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6517099403427212742.post-9216174886478363922021-11-22T12:18:33.849+13:002021-11-22T12:18:33.849+13:00So good to have you back in school Toran. I would ...So good to have you back in school Toran. I would love to see you put in a little more detail in your writing starting tomorrow. Mrs. Moalahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04394510113006974765noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6517099403427212742.post-60941084326326143882021-11-13T12:55:24.223+13:002021-11-13T12:55:24.223+13:00I am very impressed that you are able to hold your...I am very impressed that you are able to hold your breath under water for that long! Make sure you answer all of the questions in your follow up tasks. Keep up the good work. Miss Machado Miss Machadonoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6517099403427212742.post-88827609879370290002021-11-13T12:52:40.525+13:002021-11-13T12:52:40.525+13:00Great work on your Maths task Toran! Have you enjo...Great work on your Maths task Toran! Have you enjoyed learning about coordinates and maps this week? Miss Machado :) Miss Machadonoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6517099403427212742.post-44859867582014752802021-11-13T12:50:01.892+13:002021-11-13T12:50:01.892+13:00Great work on your reading task Toran. Try and exp...Great work on your reading task Toran. Try and expand on your sentences a bit more to give the reader more information. Keep up the good work. Miss Machado :) Miss Machadonoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6517099403427212742.post-2039030608326715862021-11-08T11:57:50.886+13:002021-11-08T11:57:50.886+13:00Good work on completing your reading task Toran. Y...Good work on completing your reading task Toran. You are so so capable of writing your answers in full sentences, for next time be sure to give it a go. Keep up the good work. Miss Machado :) Miss Machadonoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6517099403427212742.post-4407133869526242082021-11-03T20:20:08.868+13:002021-11-03T20:20:08.868+13:00Well done on your writing task for Monday Toran. W...Well done on your writing task for Monday Toran. What is something that you are grateful for? I love the way you are starting to think about the images and what they might be saying. Please make sure to write in full sentences and use full stop at the end of your sentences in your future work. Miss Machado :) Miss Machadonoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6517099403427212742.post-84221339839971979542021-11-01T17:29:16.595+13:002021-11-01T17:29:16.595+13:00Great effort on your task today Toran. Are you enj...Great effort on your task today Toran. Are you enjoying learning about fractions? Please make sure that you look through your work again and answer what is asked. I look forward to seeing your completed work. Miss Machado :) Miss Machadonoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6517099403427212742.post-69737149476602218012021-10-29T09:54:58.726+13:002021-10-29T09:54:58.726+13:00Nice job starting this task Toran. I'm sure yo...Nice job starting this task Toran. I'm sure you can easily fill in the addition problems at the bottom of each slide. Do you think you can come up with your own story problems and show how you worked them out?Mrs. Moalahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04394510113006974765noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6517099403427212742.post-76749962875158285412021-10-29T09:51:09.963+13:002021-10-29T09:51:09.963+13:00Nice work Toran! Where is your create task? I can...Nice work Toran! Where is your create task? I can't wait to see it! Maybe you can add it to this post, or post it on it's own.Mrs. Moalahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04394510113006974765noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6517099403427212742.post-70552681247250180422021-10-21T12:51:52.620+13:002021-10-21T12:51:52.620+13:00Well done Toran! Can you look at the last slide a...Well done Toran! Can you look at the last slide again please? You have moved the shapes across which makes a pictograph, not a bar graph. The directions ask you to use the shape tool on Google Slides to make the rectangles to add to the bar graph.Mrs. Moalahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04394510113006974765noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6517099403427212742.post-23292485483269144052021-10-01T09:51:25.546+13:002021-10-01T09:51:25.546+13:00This is a great start Toran, but I am confident th...This is a great start Toran, but I am confident that you are able to write more than five words to make your writing amazing. I would love to hear more about what your pencil was able to do. Mrs. Moalahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04394510113006974765noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6517099403427212742.post-27001907240498078312021-09-23T12:55:51.349+12:002021-09-23T12:55:51.349+12:00Nice job with your poetry Toran. I really like the...Nice job with your poetry Toran. I really like the words that you chose on each level. Mrs. Moalahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04394510113006974765noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6517099403427212742.post-70227406258858864092021-09-23T12:53:45.439+12:002021-09-23T12:53:45.439+12:00Nice work Toran. You forgot to put four words on t...Nice work Toran. You forgot to put four words on the door of your house poem. I really like that words you included on your Me poem. However, can you have someeone at home look at it with you? There are a few words that are not spelled correctly and I can't figure out what word you meant to use. Mrs. Moalahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04394510113006974765noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6517099403427212742.post-6914225994075089022021-09-23T12:50:16.834+12:002021-09-23T12:50:16.834+12:00Toran, please take a minute to look at your figuri...Toran, please take a minute to look at your figuring out box on each slide. I don't see you showing the final answer and based on your work, you are often missing a step. Mrs. Moalahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04394510113006974765noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6517099403427212742.post-11028266482151245082021-09-21T13:10:59.185+12:002021-09-21T13:10:59.185+12:00Toran, I really like your poem. However, I am posi...Toran, I really like your poem. However, I am positive that you should have created TWO poems. Please stop deleting slides on your learning tasks. Mrs. Moalahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04394510113006974765noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6517099403427212742.post-50940498255258368592021-09-16T00:46:22.256+12:002021-09-16T00:46:22.256+12:00You were amazing in the Google Meet for writing to...You were amazing in the Google Meet for writing today Toran. Thank you for sharing so many good ideas with our writing group. I can tell that you listened to the story about Rata and the tree very carefully. Ka pai.<br />From Miss Scanlan.Sharisse Scanlanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03474406992432270458noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6517099403427212742.post-11994110843515017132021-09-15T13:11:23.626+12:002021-09-15T13:11:23.626+12:00Toran, I love you symmetrical art! It looks so co...Toran, I love you symmetrical art! It looks so cool! I wonder if you could write or make a video of yourself telling a story about your artwork.Mrs. Moalahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04394510113006974765noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6517099403427212742.post-66500116091993372732021-09-15T09:16:37.742+12:002021-09-15T09:16:37.742+12:00Toran, where is the last slide for this task? You ...Toran, where is the last slide for this task? You were supposed to write a summary using your flowchart to help you. Mrs. Moalahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04394510113006974765noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6517099403427212742.post-77827278385264609072021-09-10T09:17:13.834+12:002021-09-10T09:17:13.834+12:00Again Toran, I would love to see you completing yo...Again Toran, I would love to see you completing your reading and writing tasks with as much effort as you put forth on your maths tasks. Take another look at the instructions on the last slide and see if you can turn your one sentence into a 5 sentence "burger" paragraph.Mrs. Moalahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04394510113006974765noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6517099403427212742.post-32138752117582815302021-09-10T09:15:03.107+12:002021-09-10T09:15:03.107+12:00Nice job with your maths today Toran. You are putt...Nice job with your maths today Toran. You are putting forth excellent effort to complete your maths tasks. Mrs. Moalahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04394510113006974765noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6517099403427212742.post-70558211602668182602021-09-10T09:12:13.740+12:002021-09-10T09:12:13.740+12:00Toran, one sentence is not an incredible story. I ...Toran, one sentence is not an incredible story. I know you can do better than this and I can't wait to read your story. Look at the questions on the first slide to help you.Mrs. Moalahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04394510113006974765noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6517099403427212742.post-2170380291668882332021-09-10T09:10:35.228+12:002021-09-10T09:10:35.228+12:00Yes Toran, his fate was to find his father. Please...Yes Toran, his fate was to find his father. Please complete the paragraph, do you think he deserved his fate? Make sure to have 5 sentences in your paragraph.Mrs. Moalahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04394510113006974765noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6517099403427212742.post-62928885205073020682021-09-08T19:07:27.217+12:002021-09-08T19:07:27.217+12:00Hello Toran, good boy for sharing your writing on ...Hello Toran, good boy for sharing your writing on your blog. You are right, rainbows usually look like they are moving away from you when you try to get closer to them. What does the rainbow look like? Can you use some interesting adjectives like we talked about this morning?<br />From Miss Scanlan.Sharisse Scanlanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03474406992432270458noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6517099403427212742.post-61366973323225904612021-09-06T19:59:52.331+12:002021-09-06T19:59:52.331+12:00Toran, I really think that you can add more to you...Toran, I really think that you can add more to your story about your elephant. Be sure you are showing your best work while working from home. Mrs. Moalahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04394510113006974765noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6517099403427212742.post-55421733349759288112021-09-06T19:56:22.492+12:002021-09-06T19:56:22.492+12:00Nice work Toran. It is good to see you completing...Nice work Toran. It is good to see you completing the whole task for your maths today. Mrs. Moalahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04394510113006974765noreply@blogger.com